Creative+Writing

1. Positive Consequences :)

 * make you feel and look young again
 * you could live as long as you want to
 * have a second chance to correct the mistakes that you made in the pass
 * save somebody's life from

Negative Consequences :(

 * wars fighting for control of it
 * overpopulations
 * decline of resources
 * you will see everyone you love die, if you drink from it and they don't
 * cost more worldwide problems

2. Character Development
What do you know about this character now that s/he doesn’t yet know?  she will meet the boy that she meet when she was young and something is going to happen between them

What is this character’s greatest flaw?

What do you know about this character that s/he would never admit? she wish only her father would care more about her

What is this character’s greatest asset?

If this character could choose a different identity, who would s/he be? just a ordinary girl, who don't have a lots famiy history and who have a mother and father that loves her

What music does this character sing to when no one else is around? She listens to old classical music and piano, because those things helps her think better. In what or whom does this character have the greatest faith? she is amazing at piano and she has the greatest faith in the boy, who she meet in her childhood

What is this character’s favorite movie? Disney movies, since they always have a happen ending. It is like the oppsite of her life, so when she watch the movies it make her feel better and just bring her away from the real world.

Does this character have a favorite article of clothing? Favorite shoes? Her favourite article of clothing is her baby pink dress, that her mom had given to her for her 5th birthday, it makes her feel special and pretty, like a princess. It is also important to her, because it is her last birthday present from her mom before she died.

Does this character have a vice? Name it.

Name this character’s favorite person (living or dead). her mother

What is this character’s secret wish? that she will meet the boy from the childhood memory

What is this character’s proudest achievement?

Describe this character’s most embarrassing moment.

What is this character’s deepest regret?

What is this character’s greatest fear?

Describe this character’s most devastating moment.

What is this character’s greatest achievement?

What is this character’s greatest hope? give the water from the Fountain of Youth to her mother, and the boy in her childhood dream

Does this character have an obsession? Name it.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">What is this character’s greatest disappointment?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">What is this character’s worst nightmare? when she saw person focus her mom to kill herself

Whom does this character most wish to please? Why? her mom and the one adopted her

Describe this character’s mother. dead when she was really young loves her and would do anything to protect her beautiful, gorgeous and kind

Describe this character’s father. She don't remember a lot things about his father, except for how mean he had been to her and how she hate him for marry that woman.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">If s/he had to choose, with whom would this character prefer to live?

Where does this character fall in birth order? What effect does this have? second, have an older brother

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">Describe this character’s siblings or other close relatives.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">Describe this character’s bedroom. Include three cherished items. huge room printed in purple, give people a misterious feel

What is this character’s birth date? How does this character manifest traits of his/her astrological sign?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">If this character had to live in seclusion for six months, what six items would s/he bring?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">Why is this character angry?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">What calms this character? her dog which she and the boy saved when they were young the ring her mom lift her

Describe a recurring dream or nightmare this character might have.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">List the choices (not circumstances) that led this character to his/her current predicament. To easy going, kind, push over, doesn't think about what might happen after she does something. List the circumstances over which this character has no control. Her personality, and how she does things.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">What wakes this character in the middle of the night? The nightmare that she always had wakes her up, which is when she saw with her own eyes how that woman compulsived her mom to kill herself. A loud noise and lighting would also wakes her up.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">How would a stranger describe this character? perfect, indifference and talented

What does this character resolve to do differently every morning?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">Who depends on this character? Why? There is not really a character that depends on her, since she gives people the felling that she is inaccessible to ger closer.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">If this character knew s/he had exactly one month to live, what would s/he do?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">How would a dear friend or relative describe this character?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">What is this character’s most noticeable physical attribute?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">What is this character hiding from him/herself?

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: 17px;">Write one additional thing about your character.

3. Describe the setting
The story take place in x city, because that is the girl's home town and it is where that woman, her daughter and her father lives. Also this is where her brother is too, the one she haven't see ever sence her mom died. The story take place most likely from the 2000s to 2100s, since it is a modern story. The overall mood of the story is mysterious, since the girl is like a mystery to the people around her and she is trying to revenge.

4. What is the main conflict?
Man Vs Man if it wasn't that woman and her father, her mom wouldn't die and she wouldn't be all along, so she want to revenge them for her mom and herself.

Plot Outline
Instroduction: is about what happen to her childhood life
 * how she saw her mom killed herself
 * how she meet the boy
 * how see was forced to leave home
 * what happened between her dad, her brother and her

Rising Action: is about she become stronger
 * when she was forced to leave home, somebody adopted her
 * about she and the other girl trying to become stronger, so she can give the pain to her dad and step mom like they did to her
 * also just l little bit about she going back to her hometown and what happen between her step mom and her step sister

Climax: is about she meeting the boy from her childhood
 * made her realize that revenge aren't that that important to her
 * how it changed her changed her and how they found that there is just too many trouble that they have to deal with when they are older and they can't just be friends like they use to.
 * so they went to found the Fountain of Youth together, in hope for to turn back young again

Conclusion: they found the Fountain of Youth and became friends forever